Posted by k.b. on 24 Apr 2022, 21:49
Yep ….. I loved this little scene from the outset. Personally thought it could have easily been a finalist. The figures were very nicely interacting and the water was also a nice touch. However, there was a little something - that I couldn’t figure out what it was - that seemed to let everything down and left it a bit cold, distant to the viewer.
I think only now have I sussed it out. I think it’s the photoshop background. It’s all so very ……..blue……… and cold …. And maybe unfriendly! Contradictory for telling a story.
But back to the figures I loved them… well painted, nicely composed and in general the scene was very agreeable. Perhaps a few closeups and maybe a scenic background might convince me that that indeed was the weak point - at least for me.